I remember what you wore on that first day.
You came into my life and I thought hey
you know this could be something.

The lyrics are charmed.
Which is why despite the hideous instrumentals the song stands out somewhat.
ahhh....

I need to learn how to write better lyrics dammit. Its like writing poetry I guess, but Im aiming more for structured prose. Which is what most great songwriters can do with ease.
Just cause I can't resist take a look at Taylor Swifts songs; they cant be described as poetry most of them, but more like narratives, yet they fit the line structure perfectly almost all the time. And they are awesome narratives.

I was riding shotgun with my hair undone in the front seat of his car
He's gotta one hand feel on the steering wheel, the other on my heart.

Flash forward and we're taking on the world together,
Theres a drawer of my things at your place.

though they can sound a little forced at times like in The other side of the door and Should've said no.

But hell yeah she can write great poetry lyrics too.

Take a look at this section from cold as you :

You put up walls and paint them all a shade of gray
And I stood there loving you and wished them all away
And you come away with a great little story
Of a mess of a dreamer with the nerve to adore you

Hehe she's my favourite artiste not really because of her voice, but naturally her songwriting. Her voice is solid enough to pull most of it off. And of course the amount of heart she puts into everything. You can hear it in her voice. Can't you?

haha I wonder how many of you saw the message I hid a few posts back.
If You Could See That I'm The One Who Understands You.
XD
It was the first word of every sentence.
Im betting on none.